and once again form the darkness of my mind

[TheShyKnight]

here is something i wrote a few weeks ago... hope you like it but forgive the grammer and spelling like all ways


"I sit and ask myself why"

I sit and ask myself why
all you did was smile
you did not say a word
you did not stir


I sit and ask myself why
why did i say what i did
why did i say it then
why don't you say something


I sit and ask myself why
do you even believe me
do you know how you feel
do you know what to say


Its been months now
and i still sit and ask myself why
why then did i tell you that
I love you and all you did was smile back at me

[treespirit]

ooh i like it..i like how it starts out kind of general...and then it is more descriptive at the end
you can feel the wonder..."what does that smile mean?"

[TheShyKnight]

thanks but that really happened and i'm still guessing my self

[SleepingLion]

you gonna post this everywhere you go? like I said, it's a nice poem

[TheShyKnight]

pretty much mommy i happen to like it and want to get as many thoughts as i can

[SleepingLion]

i see ;D

[neutari]

i like it, have anymore?

[TheShyKnight]

i'm sorry to say no i can't find them i have afew too but when i got my new computer i kind killed the harddisk befor i could get them off