Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
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Post by Serenity on Nov 15, 2004 9:05:26 GMT -5
she was small and blond
he was tall and dark haired
She was picked on all through Jr. High
He was always her night in shinning armor.
Best friends to the end
always together
Forever
in comes High school
He moves away to a faraway place
promises to return
She trys to move on,
But there are cheaters, liars and users.
The cigarette becomes her best friend.
Cuz without him there is no one else.
When he does come back,
she is behind the gym somkeing her tears away.
comeing up behind her he takes it all away,
takes her beck to who she was before.
Best friends to the end
always together
Forever.
When he was gone,
He had tried to find someone
that compared to her simle
Her grace and Love,
But there where was cheaters,
liars and users.
They are out in the real world now
with a fammily of there own,
and a small darked hared little girl of there own.
happy and free can't beleave
they started as
Best friends to the end
always together
Forever.
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
ok now to enter my personal text...hmmmmmm OH Shiny *gets pulled into deep trance*
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Post by Goldra on Nov 15, 2004 15:50:50 GMT -5
wow that is beautiful
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
Posts: 488
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Post by Serenity on Nov 16, 2004 9:14:40 GMT -5
I am thinking of re-writeing it and adding a few more lines.
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
ok now to enter my personal text...hmmmmmm OH Shiny *gets pulled into deep trance*
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Post by Goldra on Nov 16, 2004 16:34:02 GMT -5
oh  |
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Shadowcore
Mature Dragon
//[death and rebirth]\\
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Post by Shadowcore on Nov 17, 2004 14:46:59 GMT -5
cool sere i dont think u need to change it its very good
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
ok now to enter my personal text...hmmmmmm OH Shiny *gets pulled into deep trance*
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Post by Goldra on Nov 21, 2004 6:06:09 GMT -5
yeah i agree*looks at sodar*
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
Posts: 488
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Post by Serenity on Nov 21, 2004 13:32:38 GMT -5
really, hmm well I guess this could be all but may be I can write the next few lines then see if I like it or not.
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
ok now to enter my personal text...hmmmmmm OH Shiny *gets pulled into deep trance*
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Post by Goldra on Nov 29, 2004 18:35:20 GMT -5
ok *looks for sodar in worry*
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Shadowcore
Mature Dragon
//[death and rebirth]\\
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Post by Shadowcore on Dec 9, 2004 13:44:51 GMT -5
dont worry
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
ok now to enter my personal text...hmmmmmm OH Shiny *gets pulled into deep trance*
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Post by Goldra on Dec 10, 2004 16:09:22 GMT -5
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
Posts: 488
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Post by Serenity on Dec 12, 2004 13:32:37 GMT -5
 hehe lol
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Shadowcore
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Post by Shadowcore on Dec 15, 2004 14:04:39 GMT -5
 lol
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
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Post by Serenity on Dec 15, 2004 16:02:10 GMT -5
Inside Joke
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Goldra
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Post by Goldra on Dec 16, 2004 15:26:50 GMT -5
;D
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Shadowcore
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Post by Shadowcore on Dec 22, 2004 14:51:52 GMT -5
lol ok
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
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Post by Goldra on Dec 28, 2004 12:37:18 GMT -5
here is one i just thought of for some i know
we were together
now were apart
all because you broke
my heart
i know it is bad but i just thought of it
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
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Post by Serenity on Dec 28, 2004 14:30:47 GMT -5
no that is really good, if you expanded it could be an aswom poem
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
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Post by Goldra on Dec 29, 2004 7:34:21 GMT -5
i am working on it
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Serenity
Juvenile Dragon
Some people walk in the rain others just get wet.
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Post by Serenity on Dec 29, 2004 22:00:36 GMT -5
cool may I read it when you finished
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Goldra
Mature Dragon
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Post by Goldra on Dec 31, 2004 15:24:22 GMT -5
almost done  |
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